Tuesday, May 8, 2018

One Paper Clip: Detail, Design, Depth





            WOW! Right?  Who knew that there were so many parts to a paper clip, that they were worth naming?  That each name has history? Did you know, too, that the standard ubiquitous paper clip in the image above is known as a “trombone” clip?  How poetic!  To see the shape as reminiscent of the brass instrument!

            According to Uncyclopedia, the trombone clip as we know it was invented by King George VI and Elvis Costello—hence the name of the upper point, and the whimsical reference to the comedy team naming the lower point “Abbott.”  The paper clip functions not only to fasten papers together without puncturing them (as sewing pins once did or staples do), but as pin-curl pins, quick eyeglass fixes, wrapping paper security—jewelry, card displays, and art, in general.  The uses are infinite—anywhere from fingernail picking to TV rabbit ears.

            So let’s think about “fractals,” defined by dictionary.com as

a curve or geometric figure, each part of which has the same statistical character as the whole. Fractals are useful in modeling structures (such as eroded coastlines or snowflakes) in which similar patterns recur at progressively smaller scales, and in describing partly random or chaotic phenomena such as crystal growth, fluid turbulence, and galaxy formation.

One image of a fractal figure would be a larger scale sculpture of a paper clip, fashioned out of paper clips, as in this work I commissioned from Luke Gibbons and Daniella Richardson:
     


We have a vision of the larger sculpture by coming to know any one of the paper clips of which it is comprised.  

            Let’s think of this sculpture as symbolic of, let’s say, an interpretation of a play by William Shakespeare. If we, as set forth in the post on First Words, delve into the first word of the play or of a character in it, we will have a generative focus for understanding the whole play or aspects of the character throughout it.  So then, focusing on one paper clip—let’s say the one detachable clip on the right side of the Gibbons/Richardson sculpture—would allow us to understand the whole play/sculpture.

            Too often, student writers attempt to write about every single paper clip—every scene in which Lady Macbeth appears, every line of Emily Dickinson’s poem “My Life had stood — a Loaded Gun.” Such essays doggedly annotate every line of a sonnet, in sequence.  Oh no!  I say to myself, when such a paper gets to paraphrasing the second line of the sonnet.  Thirteen more of this grind! Thorough papers are plodding and boring to write, and plodding and boring to read. A poem written by this method will start, let’s say, with saying something about Monday, and then, when the poem gets to Tuesday, I groan—Oh no!  Not six more days through which to trudge. The same with a story that starts with breakfast and clearly will march through to bedtime. Another structure symptomatic of this thorough/not deep mode is the attempt to “cover” the whole play, scene by scene; or the novel or book, chapter by chapter—leading to cursory summaries, no originality, and superficial/clichéd claims.  If we were to review the Gibbons/Richardson sculpture this way, we would say “shoot me now” the moment we realized that we had to talk about every paper clip the sculptors used.  It’s futile and a waste of time to do so.

            Here’s another metaphor: imagine that there is a treasure at the bottom of a lake.  If we flit across the surface like a Jesus lizard or a climbing perch—a series of superficial steps on the surface—we will never find our way to the treasure.  We must choose a spot and dive in deep.  

            The take away from this post is this:  Don’t be thorough, be deep.  Choose one word, or line, or scene of literature, and delve in there.  The treasures you harvest will offer insights to the whole poem, scene, character, essay, story, novel, or play.  

            Getting to know one paper clip—its parts, its metal, its design—will tell you about all paper clips.  In the case of literary interpretation, we will all and individually and at different times, see different fractal designs—and one part will resonate across the work.

Don’t be thorough—be deep.

One paper clip.  

"But I have more than one paper clip sculpture," the author objects--ironically, so. 

Here are two more visions of paper clip fractals.  How would you analogize these renditions to the process of interpretation?

The first, by student artists Greg Stengel, Emily Yataco, Abhimanyu Singh:


And this, by student sculptors Eric Miele, Rachel Aguiar, and Maria DiDario:



Acknowledgments:

Very special thanks to Kean University Professor Stephanie Beck for embracing this commission for paper clip sculptures and for guiding her students to create these imaginative pieces; and to the student sculptors for their brilliance and devotion.

Works Cited:
 

73 comments:

  1. So I see I'm the first to actually comment on this blog post which is however weird considering we have been through so much in this class with being confused and not confused. it’s funny because too often I feel that I want to say I'm confused simply because I have been saying it for too long but this class definitely jumpstarted the process of not saying it anymore. Every time I want to say I'm confused I hear your voice saying "uh uh" you’re not confused you have questions. And I think the reason we continue to say we are confused is because be really undermined our ability to understand so much that we trick ourselves into actually thinking we are confused. But if you think about the meaning of confused it means essentially you’re lost, you don't know where you are you don't know what day or time it is, and yet because we may be unsure or unclear about something we say were confused. I for one am going to definitely stop saying I'm confused and say just what it is, that I'm unsure or have questions. (This one will go for the writing class)

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  2. Okay, here we go again from my inner poet! very similar to what I talked about in another blog post on "a little bit" when it comes to poetry there isn't really room for confusion, because essentially that's what makes a poem is nonsense (for lack of a better term) but it’s how the reader interprets the poem. for example I could have experience a broken leg and my reader never, but if I write about the pain experienced with a broken leg you can relate and say you know all about my experience being as though you have experienced some pain of your own having nothing to do with a broken leg. Unfortunately with writing narratives it isn't like that, all too often if it doesn’t make sense to the reader, usually a teacher then you didnt do the assignment correctly. I think that's why most people tend to shy away from writing narratives and more towards poetry. (This one will go towards the poetry class)

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  3. Hey Dr. Rich

    I learned a lot about paperclips in this blog, and I never knew that something so common and casual had so much history. Just like the pagination blog, it was fascinating to see just how many parts there were to a paperclip. Getting to know the paperclip also reminded me of getting to know our popcorn piece (as we did last semester). By having it in our hands for a few minutes, really examining it and getting to know it, we learned all we needed to in that short amount of time. I also really appreciate the sentiment about being deep, rather then being thorough in writing. In my poetry, I often come across a line that I wrote and run with it, focusing on the line and seeing where it takes me. For my project, I also recently listened to my characters, and focused on a few moments in the story and watched them play out on page as I wrote them and elaborated on them. The result was a much more interesting dynamic then the one that I wrote before.

    - John P.

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  4. Everything is important – that success is in the details.
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    First of all, I love pictures of paper clip sculpture which are creative and unique. I am amazed that you know paper clip has specific name in each part. However, your source is from Uncyclopedia, how many people know that. I have never thought before paper clips are an important. For me, paper clip is just paper clip which wraps paper. As your blog helps me to open my mind that if I focus in details, I will find the specific one - like you said “Don’t be thorough—be deep”. I do love your perspective about paper clip to apply to writing. I interpret that it is not only know how to write but it is an important how to make writing more interesting (it is hard for me but I will try). For example, as we all know who Shakespeare was. We must have watched his plays many times in different versions and periods of time such as Macbeth. Personally, I saw Macbeth as the plays, and I watched movie and TV series in different periods of time that it has been producing. Besides, I know whole story, and I know what is going on. It attracts me because in details of each production are unique. From now on, I learn that I am able to apply this strategy for my studying in each class. I know, details are everything – Be careful in every single detail then focus on the one that interesting and delve into it. Moreover, I will apply it into my life and my job also.

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  5. Dr. Rich,

    I love how you implement something as simple as a paper clip in your teaching philosophy. Paper clips are often overlooked and singular in purpose. However, you show the many ways in which they can be used. Something so small can have such a tremendous impact. The same goes for identifying the first words in Shakespeare's works. It seems so miniscule and granular yet it has significance in contributing to the whole piece.

    I couldn't quite grasp your concept of "deep not thorough" when it was first introduced in your classes. I found the two terms synonymous with one another. My entire academic and extracurricular career consisted of being thorough. I was expected to cover any and every topic or thing even if it meant only giving a general overview. Papers and even stories I would tell to friends and family were all about summary of everything rather than focusing on one thing. In short--and in my opinion--everyone is taught to be a bit of a scatterbrain. We have to know a little bit about a lot in order to navigate the world. At least that is what we're told. But what if we were experts in the few topics that we actually enjoyed rather than having useless information that hardly interests us at all? Through various exercises in class, I began to understand how to be deep rather than thorough, how to be specific rather than generic. Learning about your paper clip analogy certainly made it clearer for me.

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  6. I have learned in my Shakespeare Survey class, how important and what it means to have a paperclip idea. It means to have an idea, it could be one word, one sentence, or just a small part of the story and focus on that specific idea. There is always a details that I always missed and a depth of just one word can mean fifty different things, how many meanings I can find in just one sentence. Throughout all my years, I learned to write English papers writing on different sections of the stories I read, or the topic that I chose, but had never focused on one thing. This new way of writing is teaching me that is another way of writing effectively, and right to the point. With the paperclip idea I can use one subject and interpret in this different ways, I can really go deep into it, and real meaning of the subject I am writing about. Even though I still struggle and goes back to my old ways, I remember to stay and focus on one idea. Even though is challenging for me to adapt and write a detail, depth paper, I have learned there are many ways to write a paper that is not boring, and it means something to me and that I can be proud of it. It is something that I can teach my children to do for the future. I am really thankful that I am learning to write my paper this way.

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  7. Being in your class these past 3 months have completely changed the way that I write papers. I know that sounds basic but it truly has changed the way that I write and brainstorm ideas for a paper. I love the idea of the "paper clip" because it's gives us as writers the opportunity to focus on one small idea and make it into something much bigger. Ive noticed when it comes to writing papers we are given these prompts that dont really speak to us and we are forced to write how ever many pages on this prompt when we wish we could write about something that sticks out to us. Coming into this class I was never big on shakespeare, never enjoyed it but the fact that we can focus on our "paper clip" idea and write about it makes writing about shakespeare more entertaining and enjoyable. Personally I wish that every English teacher/ professor i have ever had would teach using this method. Students would be more engaged and I feel like it would make grading papers easier on the teachers. They don't have to read the same paper over and over again, they get to see different perspectives and ideas from each of their students. This class has not only helped me with writing papers but it is giving me ideas for how i should teach and implement writing in my future classroom.

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  9. One paper clip is all I need. This is what you've been telling the class for all the papers and presentations we all need to accomplish. I can speak for everybody when I say that this method was extremely helpful for planning our ideas about our given subject. As writers one flaw we tend to do is talk about everything within the given subject because we feel as if that is the best method of doing so. Thus, creating a broad paper of the subject and in turn it will lose the reader within five minutes. However, stinking to the paper clip method allows the writer, in this case me, write about the one and only subject the writer is determined to write about. For example, when I gave my presentation of Macbeth I used how his ambition was his downfall as the paper clip so I can just expand on that point further. The detail within the paper clip method is so much more vast than the other methods in which I was taught to use. This would make me go further into depth of the subject in which I’m discussing and branch it out. So now when I write about subjects that interest me I will always use the paper clip method because not only is it helpful but it's also further out the point i'm trying to make and it will make me run with it as well. All it takes is one simple paper clip to start something bigger and brighter.

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  10. This is fascinating and I would love to know more about the commissioned sculpture. I am looking for one and would like to learn more about and if Luke Gibbons and Daniella Richardson would create another.

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  11. Wow, professor, just wow. You really make a great point in this blog that I think many us are glad to finally know about. From the grades of Kindergarten to Senior year of high school is just plot summary, plot summary, plot summary! The whole entire school curriculum is based on conformity, there is no room for our own creativity or individuality. And we have been encased in that shell of conformity all of our academic lives. It is so redundant writing in the same format over and over again. We are all just writing the same paper again just with a different topic. And like you mentioned, it is boring and draining. Not only for the writer but also for the reader. I really liked the metaphor that you used about diving dive within the water to find that treasure that is the true meaning of our papers. Finding our paperclip has truly become the first step in writing our papers from now on. I have very much appreciated that outlook and perspective that you have established in the classroom and to have in our own lives and it has really impacted me to be a much more meaningful writer. I will always remember that, thank you.
    Grace Carranza

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  12. Dr. Rich,
    The paper clip concept was new to me. Until recently, I did not think about this concept at all. I was so used to doing my papers in the traditional sense that I never even considered doing my papers any other way. After my Shakespeare Survey class, I learned that instead of having a general topic and trying to fill up a minimum requirement of pages, I can pick one statement or one word from a poem or play write my paper from there. I can write about anything and everything and make so many connections to other topics and stories. It really helps to focus on one idea and expand on your own thoughts and offer your own perspective. That is what makes it so unique and original. It helps to dive deeper into what you are talking about in your paper. There are so many ways a paper clip can be used. You never realize how the minute details add up and give you so much to work with. I think that we, as students, have been taught to explain every word that we wrote and to summarize, but we have forgotten that we need to understand the deeper meaning. It is important that we don’t limit ourselves when we are writing or in anything we do in life.

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  13. Dear Dr. Rich,
    Ah the paper clips! It would take you to find so much meaning in one small object and bring it to dancing life. Who knew the paper clip had parts with actual names? And who would have thought of making art with paper clips? Your mind is a wonder. I feel your train of thought doesn’t just pass by, it circles, stops at every stop, visits and meets new people and then takes off for another spin. Before this class my writing was all over the place, my mind dragged outwards, but now I feel I can change that at will. Now my brain can look inward and examine each layer finding beauty in the details. I will admit it takes time to allow your brain to get rid of conventional structures. I still feel the urge to go back to summarizing and I still second guess myself. But at the same time, once I think about our work in class, my brain gets released and things feel better. As in everything in life, practice makes perfect, I will need to continue practicing and paper clipping my way to better writing. Sometimes I think about all the paper clips I could write about with the stories I read. Now I find myself saying “oh that would be a great paper” and for me that means my brain cells have come back to life… lol I have zombie brain! Thank you Dr. Rich.

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  14. The metaphor of the paper clip helped clarify the article, even more, Dr. Rich. We have been conditioned from such a young age to summarize our readings. I did not have a lot of chances to delve into a single line or passage of a reading and really analyze it until college. This reminded me of when you always said to find the objective correlative because if I decide to write everything I’m feeling, the point of the work become broad. Readers would get bored about what I am trying to present to them.

    “Don’t be thorough--be deep” is something that resonates with me because this can be applied to meeting page requirements. I was trained that being through would help me get my page requirement faster and easier. I was not taught to be a critical thinker or deep as Dr. Rich puts it.
    Priscilla B.

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  15. The paperclip. A brand new concept to me that I truly do not understand why no other teacher brought up. It makes a lot of sense. At first I must admit it was a bit difficult to wrap my head around but with each class and each example it started to become more clear. It is about focusing on one single aspect of a play for instance and how we can relate it to the whole thing. That one paperclip can mean so much. All other writing I have done was summary. Nothing else but summarizing the points the teacher made in class and that is not creative. It is monotonous. It is boring. Writing using this paperclip method would be easier on both the teacher and student because each paper would be different. Each student would be able to interpret the literature the way the feel is best. They would be able to speak about what truly called their attention and what they were passionate about.

    - Madeline Romero

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  17. Debby
    I remember when I was first told to write in my journal everyday, I thought “Oh boy” but as I gradually began to do it, I noticed how relaxing it can be especially as a starter to my day. On the days I wrote in the morning, I felt like whatever I wrote predicted the kind of day that I would have and on the days that I wrote at night, I find myself basically summarizing up what my day was like. Also, because this is something that won’t be read, I feel as though, I’m able to put myself into it and express myself more fluently about certain things, I do not like to talk about to others. I’ve also noticed that on days that I’m not too focused on how much I am writing, I write way more than I intended too. Journaling has allowed my mind to explore and notice many things that I didn’t before. What I absolutely love about therapy is that it takes you away from altercations that can turn into fist fight. I remember when got into it with a coworker, I wanted so bad to curse her out but I did not want to lose my job. So I went into my bag took out my journal and began writing what had happened and I thought of the whole situation and it was the best feeling ever. I got to say whatever I wanted without having to lose myself or my job. I also noticed that whenever I missed a day, getting myself back on track was a bit difficult to do. I hope to be more journaling and I hope to continue it even after this course.

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  18. I wish I had read this blog post before starting my final paper for Senior Seminar, however, I am glad to have read it now! One aspect to my first draft of my final paper was that I was writing down every single thing from my story. I wasn’t focusing on one thing, rather, ideas that all happened right after one another. When I cut almost three pages out of my paper, I had to think bigger, I could write my entire paper on just one day, and that would just be to boring. Not only was I getting bored, but I could tell that my readers were also. That is when I expanded my paper, I jumped from one day, to four weeks, or two months. It then became juicy and my workshop group was so interested in what was going to happen next!
    I kept thinking that I had to be deep, get to the good stuff, cut out that exposition. This course has taught me how to write so differently. Before I took this class, I was a writer who filled the pages with nothing but exposition, because that is how I was taught to write. I was able to dig deeper and write how I should have been writing years and years ago. I am so excited for the writer that I am today. Thank you Dr. Rich, for teaching me how to find my voice in writing, how to become more creative in the way that I write, and for teaching me to “Dig Deep.”

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  19. Seanette Martin
    April 13, 2019
    Dr Rich
    Eng Sem 4817
    One Paper Clip: Detail, Design, Depth
    Seeing the title of this blog I said to myself how much could really be said about one paper clip? To my surprise there was so much insight on paper clips, for starters I never knew or even took the time to realize that each part of the paper clip had a different name. That is a lot of different names I swear these blogs teach me something new every single time I read one and I appreciate that so much. I’m just use to using a paper clip to hold my paper work together not apply it to anything else. Your reference to paper clip and applying it to my writing struck out to me because as I write my poetry I know it is important to keep it interesting. I shouldn’t just write my poetry just because it has to be done but also keep my audiences attention.
    After you looked over my first few pages of my poetry this blog fits perfectly focus on my idea and expand on it. For example, when I spoke about the girl at the club swaying her hips to the latest song mention that exact song because that simple detail is needed. That to me would be going deeper into my work without being to thorough because without that simple detail it leaves my audience wondering what song was playing. Instead of leaving the question unanswered simply answer it so there is no mystery. I will no longer look at a paperclip as just an accessory to hold my papers together but a tool to help me with my writing “deep not thorough.”

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  20. Is it easier to work with one single paper clip or a whole box? Easy, one. That is the same when writing a paper. Dr.Rich once said in class, “I could write a one page summary on A Midsummer Night’s Dream, a two page paper on Act One, a three page paper on Act One Scene One, a four page paper on a character, and endless pages on one character quote from Act One, Scene One.” This could not describe using one single paper clip in class any better. Get down to the nitty gritty, pick something that stands out to you and write, and keep writing, keep writing until you can’t write anymore. It is hard to write a 5 page paper summary on a play, because some parts will be detailed, and some parts won’t. But using your interpretation on one small part of a character’s dialect, you can have endless amount of pages of work. There is no better work than your own, and using your opinion is extremely important, especially when you're writing to your one paper clip. Using one paper clip can also help someone else interpret the work in a different way. They could read your writing, and think, “okay, maybe I don’t agree with that the writer is saying, but now I have my own thoughts about it.” And the writing can inspire someone else to write about the same thing, just in a different way. Dr.Rich’s way of writing is definitely different, but it makes you learn to appreciate the literature much more.

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  21. Sticking to one paper clip in a paper has always been difficult for me. I have always been a thorough writer. I like to give detail, summary, and get to the deep stuff later. Upon reading this post, other posts, and taking Dr. Rich’s class I have come to realize that writing those types of essays can be very boring to write and read. Sticking to one paper clip allows me to really dive into the deep end of creativity and understanding of the plays we read throughout the semester. Shakespeare’s writing was always very difficult for me to understand. I felt discouraged when reading it because none of it made sense to me. Which often led me to go to Shmoop or Sparknotes for translations or summaries. However, now that I have learned how to paper clip I have been able to digest the readings in small pieces which have allowed me to understand it and also helped me write papers about it. Paper clipping the plays to write my paper has allowed me to get my points across by not only being organized but also staying focused on my points. It has also pushed me to go deeper in my writing without spending most of my time summarizing the plot.
    Paperclipping isn’t always easy because it involves forcing yourself to find things to write about and being creative. Finding things that aren’t written out for you on paper can often be trivial but it has allowed me to step out of the box in my thinking and allowed me to think of things I never thought about before. When I first learned about paper clipping, I thought it would be limiting to my ideas but it has actually been the opposite.

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  22. I never knew the true meaning of a paper clip until I took Shakespeare survey. I would have never known that a paper clip has several parts with specific names if it were not for this post either. I remember thinking the idea of one paper clip was ridiculous. I remember when Dr. Rich spoke about her paper clip sculpture I literally thought she was kidding until she brought it to class one day. Ever since I saw the sculpture in class I have taken the “one paper clip” idea very serious. Shakespeare is all so new to me so when I wrote my first essay I saw myself trying to write about every scene in the play to get my point across. This was the incorrect way of writing because writing about every scene is just summarizing the entire play to my readers which is boring. With the idea of “one paper clip” I was able to learn that I should only be writing about one idea from the play and sticking to it throughout my whole essay. With that one section I could break it apart and dive deep into what is being said providing an explanation to my readers. This paperclip object is small and thin but yet can do so much with the several parts it contains like holding papers together without actually tearing the paper apart. Just like the paperclip, our one paperclip in writing could be a small thought that can be broken apart in several ways to show our readers the much deeper meanings in that one small thought.

    - Ashley Cisneros

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  23. The single paper clip, made up of many parts, can lead to profound discovery. At the start of our journey in Shakespeare Survey this semester, I had no concept of the paperclip. I viewed Shakespeare as a literary genius, who made a name for himself by writing brilliant plays, transcending the average wordsmith. I was frustrated at this idea that there is more than one way to approach the text, not as a play but as literature. As we continued our journey and learned more about the different aspects or parts of the plays we discussed, my internal frustration led to unbelievable growth. While talking about characters in response to The Tempest, we tried different techniques to further our exploration of who we thought the characters were by looking at their names, first words and types. With Caliban for example, his obvious character type is that of a slave, loaded with guilt and anger, being abused by Prospero out of the pain. Caliban also shows signs of “master” tendencies, seen in the scenes with Stefano and Trinculo, specifically when they are planning their attack on Prospero. By exploring these different avenues, I slowly found myself at a loss for words, thoroughly enjoying my time as a part of that class. The fractal of information, one scene or one line, can lead to a deep journey into the nether of intelligent growth as both a scholar and actor. Now that I have these tools under my belt, I will try and apply what I have learned to all the characters I will have the chance to play in my future. For that, you deserve many thanks.

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  24. I love this analogy, and I've loved it since we went over it in class. A paper clip can hold so many things, starting with just one single concept. Take a quote that stands out to you and base your whole thing on that. It's become my favorite way of writing papers. It's actually inspired me to do video essays on YouTube about my nerd things, but I have no idea where to start, so I didn't do that. Anyway, I like the use of a paper clip better than a staple. With a staple, sure everything is held together better, but there are some things that are stuck that will never see the light of day because it's covered. Sometimes literally if a bad stapling job has been done. With a paper clip, you can take it off and see everything. Just like when writing our papers, we can take off from the paper clip to express our opinions and theories and views. And I hope to utilize this new way of writing papers in the future, especially for my next and last semester at Kean.

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  25. While taking Dr. Rich’s class I have learned a lot. I have learned that my voice matters, stop asking questions like I’m confused or what does the author think, start incorporating myself into my writing and more. The biggest and more significant thing I have learned is focusing on ONE PAPER CLIP. This means that inside of paraphrasing or summarizing or talking about a thousand different things in one paper about a play, narrow it down to one. For example, if I am reading a play and I wanted to talk about characters, instead of me talking about every character narrow it down to one. Even better, narrow it down to that one character’s first word and how it reflects the rest of his development and his story. This one paper clip opens up your mind to so many ideas. Being able to narrow it down helps you accomplish your understanding and thought. It allows you to be deep instead of just writing to write. This type of writing is critical and I can not believe it took my academic career this long to learn it. Teachers just want students to fill a page, but Dr. Rich wants us to love what we right and pick the topic because we wanted to. She wants us to write because we love to, not because we have too. She gives us open topics to write about anything that sparks our interest and to allow us to write a paper that could possibly spark hers.

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  26. The paper clip method you have taught in our class helped me to think outside the box. I did not realize how much I can talk about one little thing and expand it into four to five pages of more. It is fascinating to use the paper clip method when it comes to doing papers because it helps expand my mind into different various ideas. I also did not imagine myself to analyze literary work with so much depth and interesting interpretations. Without this paper clip method, I feel as though I would not have made it this far throughout this shakespeare class. In all my papers I simply use the paperclip method by describing, costumes of a play, a scene, a dialogue, and even a character’s first word. I am glad I learned this because it gives me such hope that I can face the fear of writing those long twenty five-thirty pages of research for any classes I may have to take in graduate school.

    Also, the pictures of the paper clip sculptures made by students were very unique to see. Not only does it display artistic abilities but it visually explains what you meant, when you wanted us to write about one little piece amongst the many things in Shakespeare’s literary works.

    Moving forward I plan to keep using this method, when writing out my papers. Hey, maybe as an educator I will also teach my students how to utilize this strategy for their papers. Not only does this method open minds but it also gives us, writers, an opportunity to express our own opinions and interpretations without being judge of some sort.

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  27. Who would have guessed that a paper clip is more than just a folded up piece of metal and that it doesn’t only serve to hold papers together. The idea of choosing one part of the poem or play and exploring the interpretations of just that one piece is new to me. I’ve only explored that in your class this semester. You were content with whatever piece we chose so long we actually were able to explain our reasonings behind the thought process. I always got anxiety if I even thought of leaving a piece out, unmentioned and unexplained. Professors usually want to ensure that we have a full understanding of the whole piece of not just a selected part of it. I did appreciate the method more because it gave us the freedom to not o it explore the piece we chose but it helps us dig deep down to uncover issues within us to make the connection. Emily Dickinson’s poems seem to give you a moment of clarity and possibly reach an epiphany. When we worked in groups of 3 or 4 it was interesting to see how we all interpreted the one line, that contained 5 words, differently.
    The paper clip serves more than one purpose and so do words, its just the matter of how we choose to do with the words that count. It’s different, but very much appreciated, preferred, and liked, that we get to walk into a classroom and basically read the unknown. There are no definitive answers and interpretations this time. We are our teacher in this course because you made us learn how to think outside the box and that’s a skill/tool that all of us will use when it comes to reading. We might not necessarily use it when writing our paper for our other classes because those professors are anti-self discovery.
    Thank you for helping make us vulnerable to open up to the text to gain that better understanding! A few students teared up, some got angry and withheld their interpretation, but through it all it seems as if your open mindedness to teaching has helped them realize their deeper issue.

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  28. Poetry is not an aspect of writing that I have had much experience with throughout my writing studies. I love the example of the paper clip. Because of my little experience with poetry I definitely found myself trying to include everything. I feel like because I am not comfortable I try to include so much because I run out of things to say. It is difficult for me to only focus on one or two aspects versus say, five, because I am not comfortable with expanding or looking for more in that one detail of the text. I am working towards being better and focusing more on one rather than it all. The paper clip example opened my eyes on how I can improve my writing and planning process. I look forward to seeing the ideas and other insight I come up with, now changing my attention to more specific aspects rather than each and every detail of the text. It will not be an easy transition, but I am willing to give it a try.

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  30. I find the analogy to paper clip creative and interesting. Indeed, when writing an essay, sometimes I try too hard to include all the aspects I found in the article that I neglect what stands out to me the most and what has the most significance. It truly is important to focus on one idea of the literature, and really dig deep into it. By doing this, students are not just reading more "words", instead they are looking into the meaning behind one significant idea, interpret it, learning what makes the idea significant, what it means in the writer's time period etc. Also, I never thought about the advantage of using paper clips for my homework because for me they are easy to lose. However, like mentioned in the blog, paper clips put the paper together without actually piercing them and it gives the students and the writers the chance to go back and revise. It also represents openhandedness.

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  31. Dr. Rich,
    When you brought in the giant paperclip with a little paper dangling and started to explain the paper clip method, I'll be honest, I thought to myself: "This ain't gonna work." But I had the opposite reaction when I started writing my draft. It was hard to choose "a paperclip". It was interesting to read and reread the same lines and come up with different interpretations and meaning for them. This method lets your creativity run wild! It is very different that what every English teacher and professors in every subject have wanted from us students. This is a refreshing way of looking at and really connecting with literature.
    -Stacy

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  32. I never knew there were so many different parts to a paper clip with different names. I’m so used to looking at literature or art in general only at the surface and accepting that for all there is. I was never taught how to take a deeper look at anything really. Only accepting what is there right in front of me and then moving on to the next thing. But ever since taking this poetry class I’ve really enjoyed finding the deeper meanings. And not for whoever is grading my papers but for me.

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  33. When you presented the class with the infamous paperclip sculpture, it was my absolute favorite idea to learn about. It was interesting to me how the imagery of a paperclip, deepened our thoughts in regards to our papers, and how to write them. Often times when we are writing a paper, we are struggling to encompass a whole text into the five-page maximum we were given. There is no way that you can fit a whole text into five pages without missing and leaving out some major and important details. But if you focus on one small passage of the text, and truly deeply dive into that one paper clip and support it with other paper clips, you are left with the beautiful sculpture of the major paperclip made out of one paper clip, as we were shown in class.

    I also like, from this post, your display of all of the names of the different parts of the paper clip. I truly did not know that it was possible to name parts of a paper clip. But when you contextualize the image of the paper clip, vs all of the different parts of literature that we are looking into, the imagery behind the paperclip makes sense.

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  34. The paper clip sculpture really made me understand what you wanted from me as a writer, Dr. Rich. I am both a visual and auditory learner, so your explanation and the visual of the paper clip was extremely helpful. I was fascinated to see a sculpture of a giant paper clip made of tiny ones, and I realized that is what Shakespeare and the rest of English literature is all about. All the small pieces is what makes the big picture. It's like a puzzle or cooking a tasty dish. The multiple components is what builds up to create the overall image. Similarly in Shakespeare, whether it be Macbeth or Venus and Adonis, each word and each line is what makes Shakespeare, Shakespeare. When I was in high school learning about Romeo and Juliet and Macbeth, I never enjoyed the plays because most of the time I never knew what was being said. My teachers made my classmates and me read it as if we understood everything. But they never let us take out the time to focus on a line or stanza and make it understandbale to us. When I first read Venus and Adonis in your class, I didn't understand most of what was being said. However, when we took time in class, partnered up with somebody, and made sense of it based on our prior knowledge and what we were learning in class, Shakespeare became so much more enjoyable. One needs to be patient to appreciate Shakespeare and his writing style, but one needs to realize that the time and patience is necessary to give that chance to others. Thank you, Dr. Rich. It is much appreciated!

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  36. After taking your Shakespeare class, I find that focusing on a single aspect rather than the subject at large is so much easier to write about. First off, whenever I start writing an essay on a piece of text or literature, I become overwhelmed. "What do I write about...what do I not right about?" Thoughts of worry flood my mind, and I end up writing about everything an anything. My writing in turn becomes very sloppy, unorganized, and honestly, it lacks personality. It ends up being something basic with no...love to it!
    What is a huge shame though, is that I feel most of my professors WANT this to happen. They want us to include everything, and want us to see if we have a good understanding of the text or source as a whole. It is my understanding that some of the professors, and you can even go as far back as some teachers in high school, just want us to spit back the information we learned from a basic reading anyway. Some may find this beneficial, however if we were to focus our papers (actually, if we were ABLE to) solely on one tiny piece, we would be able to give the paper some substance, and show that we took time analyzing an important aspect of whatever we are supposed to cover. Also, I believe that there is somewhat of a higher-level thinking process that goes along with this strategy. It definitely requires the person to think outside the box.

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  37. Admit , the first thing that jumped for me is that you read Uncyclopedia. Never expected you to visit the site? Second your use of paper clips with fractals is interesting, When did you came to this idea?

    And will agree it’s better to focus then go wide, despite the cliche of casting a wide net saying otherwise. To go deep into something and understand, Truly understand, just a small faction of something can unveil an entirely new nature to it that only now reveals itself. Think the issue is when a work has multiple themes, everyone wants to talk about all of them at once, the work becomes a sort of “find all the themes!” game where simply knowing the basic themes is the key to winning.

    James Patti.

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  38. Dr. Rich,

    After reading through this blog post, I spent some time relishing the photograph of the sculpture by Greg Stengel, Emily Yataco, and Abhimanyu Singh. I really was able to connect the sculpture to the idea of diving deep into a piece of literature. One side of the sculpture is covered in crisscrossed paper clips in the shape of Xs. These crisscrossing paperclips speak to me about the intersectionality of the speech, images, characters, themes, and emotions in a story. There is so much rich detail to be discovered if we only take the time to notice all of the connections. However, we do not do this noticing by skimming over the entire piece of literature and taking every plot point we think the professor wants us to reference and summing it all up into one boring synopsis. We do our deep dive by taking one set of crisscrossed paperclips and going deeper at the point of intersection. What secrets lie in the connections of sound, voice, tempo, word choice, and character?

    Another area of this sculpture that struck me was the row of paperclips stuck to the side of the larger paperclip, almost at a right angle. And hanging of these paperclips were strands of linked paper clips. These paperclips brought to mind the image of a rope hanging of the edge of a cliff. The straight paperclip represents the ledge and the hanging strand of paperclips represents the rope. The way the rope is linked struck me as profoundly comforting. The ledge is the firm base of a paper. It is the central idea, the central lines from the text, that the paper will focus on. The rope, or the dangling paperclips, represent the specific ideas and insights that are all connected to the firm base. The linked paperclips bring us closer to the bottom, closer to the deep heart of our interpretations, one link at a time.

    -Kathleen Peregrin

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  39. Dr. Rich
    I continue to learn from you that less is indeed more! when you showed us the paperclip sculpture in class I remember thinking to myself "how ironic, a little paperclip hanging from a huge paperclip that is also made of other paperclips?!" but then you explained to us what it meant and since then I try to focus my writing (and other aspects of my life)on that tiny paperclip and then even digesting that tiny paperclip into deeper(and even tinier) paperclips! it is very true that most students including myself of course tend to try and write about everything there is about a text, and things just go from breakfast to dinner like you said. in most occasions it's a never ending adding and adding new content and ideas until our paper is filled with a ton of non analyzed, undigested information. thank you Dr. Rich for teaching me that one single paperclip can be more than a whole box :)
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  40. Dr. Rich The background story and the History of the paper clip and all of its parts lost me. From what I can interpret We as writers should take on one part of the paper clip and write about that.My apologies for paraphrasing and Summarizing. I will say that It does help me to concentrate and write a better paper when I focus on one part of the story. Drawing from multiple parts does clutter the paper which leads me to scatter my thoughts.Thus taking too long to state my interpretation. This can be frustrating to a teacher especially if they cannot follow the paper.
    Najeeah

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    1. I totally agree with you! This is the first time I am seeing such thing like that. Moreover, this is so helpful for me to drop down my points

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  41. I think that we have learned the "proper" way of writing papers with thesis'. The thesis should include three reasons, parts, etc. and the body paragraphs should be of those three things. But then the student isn't reading between the lines and analyzing. The student is writing about too much at one time and the writing can become confusing.

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  42. This really gives perspective. Something as simple as a paper clip is so elaborate and complicated. Often times, we try to talk about too much and give a vague summary. I think this is such a great analogy! Instead of writing about thata big paper clip, we can focus and really nail an analysis of one little paper clip to ensure every aspect of that "paper clip" is covered and explained
    Edward Wagner

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  43. I would have never thought that something so simple could have so much meaning behind it. The meaning of the paper clip allows us to understand to only focus on one idea because that one small idea will transition into something bigger. When we try to focus our writing on too many ideas we truly are not digesting and focusing on all those ideas all at once. Who would have known that this perspective about paper clips would make so much sense? I can admit that it can be hard to only focus on one paper clip (one idea) when writing but as I continue to reread, I was able to understand different interpretations on that one focus. I enjoyed reading all the names of the different parts of the paper clip and I would have never guessed there were many parts to a simple paper clip. I did not even realize that it resembled a trombone. The paper clip sculpture allowed me to understand that you can create more detail and depth to your writing if you only focus on one idea. Choosing one word or short passage to truly dive into will allow the writer to gather new perspectives and thoughts that will make the writing interesting to read. This concept has made me understand what Dr. Rich would like from our writing.
    Jacqueline Perez

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  44. First, and foremost, I was surprised to see that various parts of a paper clip and the multitude of uses. Secondly, I appreciate how the paper clip was used as a metaphor to represent ideas for a paper. Instead of focusing on a whole subject, or theme, I can zero in on specifics. Trying to interpret literature as a whole can be very vague and cause thoughts to be scattered, but narrowing down options and breaking it up, it is much easier to understand and interpret.

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  45. I appreciate the paper clip sculptures at the end of this post. I think it conveys the idea of how many different interpretations are in a book, but also shows that we only need to find one to go into. These sculptures also act as a good metaphor for interpretations, yes on its surface its just a paper clip, but there's so much meaning behind it. The phrase "don't be thorough, be deep" is represented finely in the paperclip sculptures.

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  46. I love the idea of the paperclip because it lets students get straight to the point of their paper. It also allows the writer to take a part of the idea and go even deeper with it. This blog helped me write my paper because it allowed me to focus on a point that I found unique and let me be able to prove my point without giving unnecessary information.

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  47. Greetings Dr. Rich and fellow classmates,

    Extended apologies for all of the boring, plod filled papers you've had to dread yourself through. I was feeling rather guilty, while also laughing when I read Dr. Rich's line, ""Such essays doggedly annotate every line of a sonnet, in sequence. Oh no! I say to myself, when such a paper gets to paraphrasing the second line of the sonnet. Thirteen more of this grind! Thorough papers are plodding and boring to write, and plodding and boring to read."

    Luckily, the sculpture that was brought into our Shakespeare Survey meeting a few weeks ago, visually gave the entire class a new perspective on how to write. I appreciate the idea being shown; instead of writing about something in its entirety, simply select a single sliver to script. This concept allowed me to switch up my writing technique, and better engage myself within the text.

    Thanks,

    Ellen B.

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  48. Before I actually begin reading this post, I wanted to take note of my first thoughts of the diagram of the paper clip. Your "WOW" is exactly what I said to myself! Anytime I see the name Abbott I think of Abbott and Costello. Some parts of the paper clip sound like superhero gadgets -- The Hemicurcular Returner specifically. I also appreciate the use of astrology and astronomy allusions in the name, like Mars and Moon Loop, and The Oval of Aquarius. Now that I actually have read your article, I guess you could consider the following my "real" response.

    When you explained to our class that we should write our papers as if we are focusing on a part of a paper clip I didn't understand it at first. The visual sculptures definitely helped, but the metaphor of the lizards was surprisingly the most helpful. (Maybe because I think reptiles are super cool??) This request of going deep from a professor definitely isn't my first, but it's the first time that a professor was serious about it. Most of them mean analyze from a lens and discuss the whole story from that lens, but you were requesting us as students to truly dive into the text, focus on one singular thing, and explain the significance behind it. Time and time again we have discussed in our class how teachers in the past have done us wrong by having us demolish a piece of literature instead of treasuring it. Thank you for showing and teaching us otherwise.

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  49. “Don’t be thorough, be deep. Choose one word, or line, or scene of literature, and delve in there. The treasures you harvest will offer insights to the whole poem, scene, character, essay, story, novel, or play.” It’s incredible that I was able to make it through years of schooling without hearing these words. The way you have explained how each little part makes up something bigger really puts reading into perspective. How often I have read a poem front to back but haven’t dissected a stanza or line the way it deserves to be read.
    I know want to go back and reread books and poetry I have read in the past. Know I’ll know to mull over each word and appreciate the way they were crafted.

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  50. The paper clip sculpture is really helpful. It really made me understand what you want in our essay. Also, it made me understand what my other professors means when they tell us to focus on one point and expand the topic while staying on the point we want to make. Furthermore, no professors in my previous classes in high school or in college have thought us like what they want in an essay like you did by paper clip sculpture. I am going to be a teacher, so I can use your idea of clip sculpture to make them better understanding of what their paper should look like. My previous professors would give us numbers of worksheets for us to focus on the points. For examples, the chart sheet, having bullet points and answering the questions. I never like those because in my opinion, they were wasting my time. Instead of wasting my time on worksheet, I would just go direct to writing my paper. This way was easy for me, but I sometimes would get stuck to it. However, your paper clip sculpture have taught me what exactly my paper should have it. Additionally, it helps me to drop down my points more easy in order to write my paper. I wonder why didn’t any of my previous professors haven't taught such ideas rather than giving us worksheet to drop ideas. I am very lucky that I attend your class and it really made my life easy because I have to write a lot of essays in my field of major.

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  51. When I was first introduced to the paper clip method, it seemed odd and downright frustrating, especially when I had to write my essays. It felt like choosing a topic was the most difficult thing in the world, and sometimes it was. But throughout the semester, once I really relished in what the paper clip method actually meant and how to implement it, I realized that it wasn’t so hard after all. It has definitely changed my perspective on how I want to write my essays from now on rather than going through the traditional, mundane process and outline. I feel as if this method has definitely broadened the way I think and come up with topics as well as given me the opportunity to figure out how to focus on one thing within a specific topic rather than a topic with multiple dimensions. I don’t see myself struggling to fill the pages up with words to meet the page limit with this method as much as I usually would if I were writing my papers in the old way. I was so used to the way other professors taught me how to write that I didn’t realize how much more I’m actually learning when writing with the paper clip method.

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  52. I loved the sculptures of the paper clips, when taking this course that is something you always referenced too. Don't be thorough, be deep is something I will keep with me and use on a daily basis.

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  53. Dr. Rich,

    This is definitely a unique way to look at writing. Most times in my papers I do end up paraphrasing or summarizing what the author means (as if I know). While I am writing it, I can only imagine the redundancy of what the other 20 people in my class are writing. It is very boring and annoying to write as I can imagine it is to read, but this is how teachers explain the assignment. I enjoy this fresh take on writing because it will allow me to better understand my own analysis and what I feel I am getting out of the reading. The harder part (and overthinker in me) is trying to figure out how I will make my writing stretch into 4-5 pages after the two page draft. However, I am taking the paperclip analogy and looking at it as one step at a time. I tend to think too far ahead of myself (which shows in my writing) instead of being present and delving into what the focus is in the moment. I also think it's interesting that in my 21 years of life, this is the first time I am hearing about a paperclip having a name and each section of it has a name as well. I tend to skip over the importance of a paperclip in the same way that I tend to toss in a quote and not fully elaborate its meaning to me when writing a paper. This blog has given me insight on what I can and should do with this paper and ones to come.

    Janaya- ENG3215*4

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  55. From what I tried to understand this one paper clip, it fills every information that goes deep to get around. Just like paraphrasing a story to have what was read and about, the reading is not sinking in deeper about the whole part of the story. Only getting through the past few weeks of this semester reading “The Rape of Lucrece” words that were spoken from Tarquin about his obsession to rape Lucrece and Lucrece’s thoughts of suicide, there is gaps to fill about the kind of character they are in the story. Just as the example metaphor, “imagine that there is a treasure at the bottom of a lake. If we flit across the surface like a Jesus lizard or a climbing perch—a series of superficial steps on the surface—we will never find our way to the treasure. We must choose a spot and dive in deep.” The paperclip picture example naming the parts of the clip, The Deacon’s Gap and Moon Loop, there are a lot of lines in “The Rape of Lucrece” about the characters and the stanzas can say much more about them that can go deeper and understanding.

    The paperclip example expands what more can be wrapped around with details and information that I got and elaborate on characters and words in other stories. The question of the two structures “How would you analogize these renditions to the process of interpretation?” is they have different appears of being neat or messy and still able to have an image of a larger paperclip.

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  56. Dr. Rich,

    I never thought writing an essay could be compared to a paper clip, but it is actually a really good analogy. When looking at the paper clip sculpture, you only need to analyze one paper clip to understand the whole sculpture. If you explain all the different parts of the single paper clip, you can then look at the whole sculpture and understand its parts, too. But if you go through every single paper clip, made up of all the same parts, it will be extremely boring and tedious. Now I can see how this is similar to writing an essay. I'll admit that when a professor wants me to fully analyze a poem or story the first thing I want to do is go through all the major parts of it and explain each one, to show that I have read it and know what each part means. However, after reading this blog post I realized I don't need to go through every point. Pulling out an important quote or scene and deeply explaining what it means relating to the whole work will have a better effect, and not be so boring. I think it is difficult to pull out one point of a story and just use that for a whole paper, but if you relate it to other things that happen in the story, while keeping the focus on the one main point, I think it will be easier.

    Danielle Piescor

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  57. This blog post was an interesting way to transition into the different forms of papers. I liked the metaphor of the paper clips, as I have never realized the anatomy and detail that goes into such an overlooked item. I agree that papers that aim to cover everything tend to summarize more than explore, and often leave out glaringly important references or underlying information for the sake of rushing through to get to the end. This makes papers boring, predictable and repetitive, as it is repeating information you have already read. Some people may find it hard to believe that a paper that is 8 pages long and full of summary is worth less than a 4 page paper that is detailed, interpretative and deep.
    The metaphor of the lake resonated with me the most. Flitting across the surface is the same as paraphrasing or summarizing the information given to you within the work. True interpretation leads to discovering the treasure that the novel has to offer: it is always better to take a risk and write about something that you have found meaning in rather than safely (and boringly) summarizing the book. I feel students often spend too much time flitting across the surface because that is all that SparkNotes, Shmoop (etc) provides. Unless you take the time to dive into the novel and immerse yourself, you will not understand the true intentions of the author, the way they use words, or any other concepts that would make for a truly great paper.
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  58. I always loved the idea that by focusing on the smallest aspect of a whole one can come to a better, more clear understanding of a subject. I am surprised to learn that paperclips can be broken down into smaller parts such as the abbot point. I always just assumed that a paper clip is a paper clip. I always found it fascinating how even the smallest, most fascinating object can be broken down into even smaller parts and that those parts have their own meaning that adds to the whole. I love taking things apart such as computers or other electronic and seeing all the working parts that are often necessary for it to function but are out of sight and ignored. I do agree that when one can look at a subject deeply instead of broadly. One conclusion is often wilder and more fascinating for it. I also agree that when one looks at any piece to broadly, it often ends with a simple summarizing where nothing new is found and nothing gained. They’re always a joy in looking into something deeply and coming up with all sort of new and radical ideas from it.

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  59. Yes, indeed, Dr. Rich! Who knew that there were so many parts to a paper clip, so worth naming! Not until upon one of your recent and unorthodox Shakespeare teachings did, I learn that the "standard ubiquitous paper clip in the image above is known as a "trombone" clip." But I still cannot fully comprehend the poetic symbolism as reminiscent of the brass instrument. Therefore, I will do my very best to analogize student sculptors Eric Miele, Rachel Aguiar, and Maria DiDario's renditions to the process of interpretation, "one paper clip at a time," beginning with detail.

    The detail, in multiple ways, is indescribable. And its impressive sculpted design is without question a work of art. But, the depth, I see, can poetically measure up with Shakespeare's twisted tale, The Rape of Lucrece, "First, like a trumpet, doth his tongue begin. To sound a parley to his heartless foe". It seems to visualize the downward spiral that would soon embark upon Lucrece prior to her decision to commit suicide. The top portion of the paper clip appears to droop and hang lower than the bottom part, as the other paper clips formed in groups around the top, middle, and bottom, just like the characters and acts written within the poem. Case and point, after the rape scene, Lucrece is portrayed as sad and troubled, "To cross their arms and hang their heads with mine," which in turn caused her unfortunate demise.

    So, taking a closer look at this remarkable and unique paper clip, this is my best-analogized process of interpretation — a large group of paper clips characterized in the Shakespearean astonishing poem of The Rape of Lucrece. Astounding!

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  60. I agree with what you said about being deep instead of thorough. To be thorough means to explain every detail and to be deep means to start from the top of the surface and go all the way down according to bing.com. The differences between the two styles is being deep will give someone a fuller idea of what you are trying to say instead of just the surfaces details. In the blog you mentioned that being deep with a line in what you are reading will allow you to understand the whole text. I think this is true and cool because if you decide to be deep with this line “I love cake”, you will be able to tell a lot about the person saying it. Like for example they love dessert, they might like chocolate cake and strawberry as well, they might not be on a diet, etc.
    I think both renditions symbolize hard work and technique. I am sure they both took a certain amount of time to be made. They each have a different design but yet still show a visual of a paper clip which takes technique because you want to be able to make something your own way but still want to be able to make the assigned task.
    The creator of the first picture wants the viewers to know the that the design is of a paperclip more than the second image because, the paperclip is not as distorted as the second one. The second pictures intentions are different, the artist of the second picture would like the viewer to take a closer look at the sculpture and decipher what it is because it is hard to tell that it is a paperclip from a quick glance.

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  61. When it comes to the paperclip statues and how they are analogues to the process of interpretation itself, I mainly find that the statue by Greg Stengel and company best compasses the idea. This statue has dozens of paperclips sticking out and hanging out from the body. In this way, it encompasses the idea of interpretation as just like many paperclips stick out from the body of the statue, many interpretations stick out from a text. Despite there being many of these interpretations sticking out, the reader may latch onto one or two of these ideas and ignore the rest as by acknowledging other the ideas it supposedly invalidates the ones the reader is attached to. The thing is, much like all the paperclips that stick out on the statue equally stick out to create a distinct work, so do all the interpretations equally stick out to create a unique text. As such, just as looking at only one paperclip on the statue invalidates the hard work put into the statue, only looking at one interpretation in a text can ruin the work the author put in to make it multi-faceted. Willfully ignoring other ideas has lead to institutionalized texts, where there is only one 'right way' that story can be seen in and anything deviating from that is wrong. This has led to students needing to regurgitate information onto tests and we all know how students 'love' to do that. It just goes to show how destruction being narrow minded can be to a story.

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    Matthew Ponte

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  62. "One Paper Clip: Detail, Design, Depth” brought me back to a poem I wrote in 2015, “ I’ll care for you, I’ll hold you up out of the water and help you learn to swim but once you can swim I will not teach you how to float, I don’t want you to float I want you to dive in, I want you to feel everything deeply not just at the surface…” It relates to the idea of the paperclip and how if you examine one thing in depth you can understand everything as a whole. When writing my paper for “The Rape of Lucrece” an ending couplet really stuck out to me, the couplet read, “Pure Chastity is rifled of her store,And Lust, the thief, far poorer than before.” It encapsulated the poem(further detail in my paper). I love details and depth. I will always pull something more from a sentence or a word if I am given the room to explore it. I do not like to be bored; I have never been one to live on the surface, that goes for my school work and my social life, I need more. On another hand I found it funny how many parts a paperclip has, that in itself is deep. Something so small can have so much to it.

    Alyssa Ortiz

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  63. The word paperclip in this class holds a meaning deeper than anything. One paperclip contains a whole story but in this class the meaning of it holds a different amount of weight than you think One paperclip is the whole story but what makes the paperclip holds a great meaning. As a writer what you want to say to the reader is important and asa writer you must get your opinion out to the reader in a way that does not make ther reader bored and makes them lose connection to what you are trying to say. In this class Dr.Rich tells us that what we have to say is important but make sure it holds meaning and does not bored the reader. Once the reader is bored there is no point the reader quickly disconnects and loses interest in what you are trying to say. And now to connect it to the mind of a young writer the paperclip is the story and what makes the paperclip is important. A young writer must have good and interesting points that grabs the reader attention and makes them want more. I leave off with this make sure your paperclip is strong in detail and meaning rather than a limp paperclip that lacks detail and quickly loses it meaning.

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  64. March 5th 2020 @9:20 PM was written by
    Joe Menocal

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  65. A single paper clip has so many different parts and names to it as shown in the image inserted at the top of the blogpost. A story itself also contains numerous different details within them. Often times, writers get stuck, and feel the need to insert every part of the story into a single paper, feeling as though they need to relay all the information to the reader for them to understand what their paper is about. However, if the reader already knows the work you are referencing, why retell every detail? Why insert every minor part of the script or story? Why paraphrase? It is better to just dive right into your work so that the message isn't lost.
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  66. The paper clip is so important! The idea of compiling all your ideas and finding the one paper clip to really hone in on the idea is something that has helped me out in numerous papers since I have learned about it. Going into your work that you want to talk about rather than giving a plot summary or being general allows you as a writer to really relish the text. Not only this, but it then shows the reader that you have truly thought this through and wanted people to see your point from your perspective.

    David Rivera, Jr.

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  67. There is a tendency for writers to assume that they need to spoonfeed their readers every tiny detail of a plot in order for their point to come across. But often paraphrasing undermines the point of your writing, and a symptom of too much synopsis can be boredom. A paper is made to hook a reader but within a forest of the synopsis, the intrigue can get lost.

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  68. Metaphors and analogies are some of the most effective tools I have in both understanding something and teaching it to someone else.

    My mind likes to create webs of meaning, and an image serves as a great focal point.

    And this article is a fantastic example of that. It helps me narrow down my thoughts and form a single idea into a much greater paper. Starting somewhere small and appreciating it to its fullest extent is a wonderful way to approach a work.

    I took this approach when writing about Tarquin's inner turmoil in Shakespeare's "The Rape of Lucrece", and I wrote what is one of my favorite papers in my entire academic career.

    Lesson learned.

    -Liam

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  69. My god! I never thought there is so much to a paper clip! I am amazed! I mean, I use tens of them daily, not even mindful of what goes into making one. Now, when I think about it, I realize how hard it would be to run my Seo Article WritingCompany without these seemingly simple pieces of metal. I am grateful to the one who invented these – I truly am!

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