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Tuesday, February 13, 2018

First Words First

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                                             …fruits that blossom first will first be ripe
                     Iago, Othello (2.3)

“First place,” “first glance,” "first" anything"—birthday, date, car, taste of pomegranate—is “first and foremost.”  In other words that embody firstness: we forefront priorities—primarily prize what’s premium.  Once there is that first mark on a blank page, the paper is forever transformed.  First impressions last.

This is especially true in reading literature.  Let's take Horatio's first word in Hamlet: “Friends” is Horatio’s first word Hamlet.  Throughout the play, he is, scene after scene, Hamlet’s only and most abiding friend.  Using the concept of friendship as our first-word point of entry—we can read Hamlet through the character of Horatio.  We can characterize Horatio either deductively—identify core characteristics of friendship and find examples of them in Horatio’s words and actions.  Or, we can interpret inductively—discern what friendship means by describing Horatio’s character as he moves through the play.  The most interesting interpretations combine both a deductive and an inductive approach.

For those who prefer to interpret Horatio deductively, it’s helpful to find what experts have to say about friendship.  In his book Buddy System: Understanding Male Friendships, Geoffrey Greif identifies four levels of friends: must, trust, just, and rust.  The must friend is the go-to guy for all things earth-shattering.  The trust friend is less close than the must.  The just friend is just that—a casual acquaintance.  The rust friend floats in and out of the relationship.  Which kind of friend might Horatio be, and what’s our proof?

When, at the beginning of the play, Horatio sees the ghost of Hamlet’s father, he is the one who says

Let us impart what we have seen tonight
Unto young Hamlet; for upon my life,
This spirit, dumb to us, will speak to him. (1.1.175-6)

A just or rust friend might run away both from the ghost and having to “get involved.”  A trust friend might be hesitant to get involved.  But must friend identifies the crisis, is aware of the context, informs his friend, and “has his back,” as they say.  The bearer of bad news is always at risk of the receiver’s reaction.  But Horatio will go boldly to his friend’s side. 

In the one expression “upon my life,” we can see how much Horatio would risk to empower his friend with information.  Note, as well, that Horatio does not say I will impart what I have seen tonight.  Horatio speaks in terms of us and we. He is a man who values connection.  He doesn’t say “Go tell him” or “I will tell him,” he says “Let us”—collaborative, respectful, inviting.

            And so we would proceed, seeking out scenes that either include or refer to Horatio, and considering each as proof or disproof of Horatio’s friendship.  We would apply Greif’s categories, deductively; and articulate, inductively, the various traits of friendship Horatio displays.  We might ask the question: “Is Hamlet a friend to himself?” We might compare and contrast how others treat Hamlet.  When we arrived at the scenes with Rosencrantz and Guildenstern, we would further appreciate, because of their treachery, what a courageous friend Horatio is, in contrast.  In most productions of Hamlet, Hamlet dies in his arms at the end of the play.  How much more poignant and meaningful becomes Horatio’s final address to Hamlet because of our close attention to the course of their friendship:

                        Now cracks a noble heart.  Good night, sweet prince,
                        And flights of angels sing thee to thy rest! (5.2.361-2)

Notice that he uses thee and thy, instead of you and yours.  Originally, the form you instead of thou was used by the elite English to align them with the fashionable French tu and vous. It was distancing and asserted power positions above inferiors. Thee and thy were more intimate uses of the second person pronoun, as would be used in prayers.  In our time, philosopher Martin Buber used the more archaic thou to distinguish a reverent from a casual regard for another.  Interesting, especially in this context, is that those who practice Quakerism use the thee, thy, thou, thine form address during meetings, and call themselves “The Friends.”

            Because of the nature of interpretation and Shakespeare’s genius, first words will dependably clue us into his characters.  Horatio would never begin with I, as Katharina does in The Taming of the Shrew, nor would she be prompted to start with “Friends.”  And that makes sense.  Traditionally, readers have interpreted Katharina as the shrew of the play (for an alternate reading, check out the Titles chapter on pages #-#).  “Shrew,” when designating a person, means ‘violent, scolding, argumentative.’  Such a person would be self-centered, self-satisfied, selfish—all about “I” instead, as in the case of Horatio, “we.” 

When we trace Katharina through the first couple of scenes, we see her displaying what doctors Leonard C. Groopman and Arnold M. Cooper call “narcissistic personality disorder.”  Conducting a brief search, we find that the symptoms of this disorder include these:

  • envious
  • requires constant attention and admiration
  • calculating and manipulative
  • has no empathy for others 
  •  arrogant
  • expects special treatment

In 1.1, father Bapista calls Bianca, Katharina’s sister, “good,” and “my girl.” As we learned in the chapter on Rhythm, how a line varies from the classic ten syllable iambic pentameter is meaningful.  Katharina hesitates before she delivers these words, starting with a seven-syllable line:

                              A pretty peat! It is best
Put finger in the eye, an she knew why. (1.1. 78-9)

We can read that hesitation as proof of Katharina’s envy.  She feels slighted, and is calculating how to strike back at her father and sister.  Even without knowing what “peat” means, we can already discern the ‘scratch her eyes out’ violence of “put finger in the eye.” A quick dictionary check tells us that, in this context, “peat” means ‘a merry young girl’ and that “an” means ‘if.’ Katharina’s remark is sarcastic, devoid of empathy, angry that Bianca has their father’s affection.  In 2.1, Katharina ties up her sisters hands—in a gesture of bondage—and interrogates her as if Bianca were a criminal.  And does not relent when her sister pleads

                        Good sister, wrong me not, nor wrong yourself,
                        To make a bondmaid and a slave of me. (1-2)

In her book Identifying and Understanding the Narcissistic Personality, Elsa F. Ronningstam articulates the painful shame and insecurity that underlies the narcissist’s bravado.  In the rest of the play, we will see Petruchio humiliate, starve, isolate, and shame Katharina—thus reducing her to her underlying insecurities.  In the chapter on Dismounts, we will ask whether Katharina is ultimately tamed.

How do first words affect your life experiences?  How can focus on first words enrich your literary experiences?

Monday, April 16, 2018

"iS Slapped:with;liGhtninG": Punctuation and Meaning

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                   Punctuation gives us the human voice, and all the meanings that lie between the words.
                               —Pico Iyer

            When language was chiseled into stone slabs in ancient Greece, the writers had to save space, so they left none between words.  Words ran together and became confused.  So the first punctuation element was a dot suspended between words to separate them.  Later, space itself was used to separate—to punctuate—words.  White space includes word spacing; paragraph, stanza, section and chapter breaks; and book covers.  Capitalization—a word derived from the Latin caput—was originally used to indicate either a new head(ing) or the name of a head of household.  So white space and capitalization are punctuation, as well. 

            Let’s remember that poetry has changed from the predominantly oral and physical art of the itinerant bard, to an increasingly visual medium on the page.  The voice inflections of the live poet have to be recorded on the page, like sound on a musical score, to indicate pacing, meaning, and emotional nuance. But we must also reconstruct the physical gestures of the poet, for, as W. B. Yeats tells us, art comes from the “fountain jetting from the […] sensations of the body.”  Mining the etymologies of the names of punctuations, we can re-embody the hand gestures of a bard. The gesture is like that of a cupped hand waving things apart.

            In terms of punctuation, poetry falls somewhere between the pyrotechnics of ee cummings, and the spareness of W.S. Merwin, who punctuates only with white space, capitalization, and traditional apostrophes.  Considering that most poetry falls somewhere between these two extremes, we can better appreciate the synaptic and expressive power of punctuation. 

Here is an eleven-line excerpt from section XXXVIII of cummings’s “W (Viva),” which includes the title of this essay:

n(o)w                                                                                       1
the                                                                                  2
how                                                                                         3
dis(appeared cleverly)world                                             4
iS Slapped:with;liGhtninG                                                       5
!                                                                                               6
at                                                                                          7
which(shal)lpounceupcrackw(ill)jumps                                     8
of                                                                                             9
THuNdeRB                                                                             10
loSSo!M iN                                                          11

            cummings renews our sense of the uses of punctuation by playing meaningful counterpoint with the norms.  For example, in the first line he parenthesizes the “o” in “now,” creating a tension between the words that that suggests: “now,” “no,” “o,” “ow,” and even “nw.”  How appropriate a response to a lightning storm, which forces a sense of urgency and nowness on us, and the ambivalent reactions of “no,” “o,” and the wincing “ow.”  With its “o” dropped out, “nw” feels sudden.  Visually, the parentheses create a whirlwind around the eye-of-the-storm “o.” 

            In line 5, cummings capitalizes the second instead of the customary first letter of “iS,” thus aligning and amplifying the sound “S” with the capital “S” in “Slapped,” the following word.  The sound effect sizzles, as lightning does.  Had cummings not capitalized the “S” in “iS,” the “is” would have had merely a “z” sound. Also, he would have lost the surprise effect of “S,” which mimics the surprise of lightning.  Instead of white spaces to separate the three linked words in line 5, cummings used a colon and semicolon, punctuations traditionally used to separate much larger units of language.  The colon functions like two pointing index fingers:  LOOK AT THIS.  “Slapped,” like lightning, is sudden and clipped, especially with the colon following it.  The word “with” is slapped—struck—between the muscular punctuation marks of the colon, and the semicolon (half comma and half period)—as lightning is surrounded by the expansive dark before and dark after it.  Because we have become accustomed to white spacing between words in the five centuries since Gutenberg, there is tremendous tension between our expectations and the surprise of this line.  Even more unexpected is the word “liGhtninG,” whose capital Gs flash, and flash into our eyes, as lightning would.  cummings’s choice of capitalizing the Gs is especially meaningful, since the letter is often an initial morpheme in words related to visual experience, as in “glow,” “glimmer, “glance,” “goggles,” “gaze.”

In contrast to cummings’s punctuational exuberance, W.S. Merwin has an ascetic aesthetic.  Consider the last three lines from his poem “Just This,” in which Merwin also works with lightning:

how did this haste begin this little time
at any time this reading by lightning
scarcely a word this nothing this heaven

By not punctuating the first line of this excerpt, Merwin encourages us, as readers, to enact the haste about which he writes.  We can read “begin” as a transitive verb with “this little time” as its object, so that haste literally “begins” time.  This is quite true:  To be in haste is to be pressed for time, and so very aware of it and its passing.  We lose our sense of time when we are absorbed and leisurely.  So time does begin when we are in haste.  “Begin” can also function as an intransitive verb, with “this haste,” and “this little time” parts of a series of subjects.  In either case, the rushing through to figure out the syntactical relationships in the line (which the lack of punctuation creates) is like a rush of lightning.  That we may be confused on first reading reflects the usual consequences of haste.  If Merwin had punctuated these lines according to the second, intransitive reading of the verb, it might have yielded the following possible translation:

How did this haste begin, this little time
(at any time), this reading by lightning
(scarcely a word), this nothing, this heaven?

So marked, the poetry changes significantly.  The commas cut in, cut off, and weigh down.  We are certainly more sure of how to interpret this version of the lines, and less, therefore, in the more hesitant experience of “reading by lightning.”  The parentheses show the paralleling of the “this______” constructions, but minimize the import of the phrases they peripheralized.   The final question mark is a strong end punctuation.  Although a question, it nonetheless creates a finality that the unpunctuated words do not imply.  On some readings, the lines become a rhetorical question, which actually is an assertion inviting no further response.  In Merwin’s version, nothing and heaven are followed by a drop off into white space—a far more provocative experience for the poem.  By providing only white space in these lines, we are left to our own interpretive devices.  And that, after all, is the truth of reading poetry, of reading by lightning—that there is no final meaning.  

In my own poetry, one of my favorite punctuation breakthroughs was in a work originally titled “F.Y.I.: An Interoffice Memo.”  In this poem, a young woman addresses a business colleague who both attracts and repels her by his sexual overtures. In the early drafts of the poem, I used traditional punctuation, clearly marking off phrases and sentences and lines.  I soon realized, however, that these clear demarcations contradicted the psychological blurring and testing of boundaries between the two characters.  Here are the first two of fifteen stanzas:
 
F.Y.I.: An Interoffice Memo

Behind the sweating cinderblock wall between them,
he sucks Merit butts and True Blue.
Smoke smolders around his doorjamb.

She emerges from her side to ask him not to.
He responds, Open your window, and belches
the belch of someone who always can.

The title is too sure of its boundaries—the periods after the abbreviated words For Your Information too defining.  The colon functions like two pointing fingers that know what they are indicating.  Period/end of sentence: there is nothing smoky and wavering about “Smoke smolders around the door.”
The current first-person version is as spare of punctuation as Merwin’s poetry is: Here are the title and first two of thirteen stanzas:

F Y I  Need to Talk

Between us  the cinderblock wall
Its sweat  grit  and empty cores
You puff True Blues and Now

To smoke a frame around your door
Where I wait to ask you
Again  to open your window

The first, highly punctuated title was rhythmically and thematically inappropriate.  Pulling out the punctuation, I realized that what followed the colon was dull and too-self-explanatory.  “FYI” is only used as a memo heading for “For Your Information,” so why define it as such. When I tried “FYI,” I saw a further opportunity for ambiguity.  “FY” can be an acronym for “F____ You” and the “I” can either be the first person pronoun of the sentence “I Need to Talk,” or short for some slur, such as “Idiot.”  But there were not enough cues in “FYI” to invite alternate interpretations.  I brought my puzzlement to my Senior Writing Seminar as a punctuation challenge, and my student Abigail Avis cleverly suggested the title I finally kept: “F Y I Need to Talk” allows for several groupings/interpretations by a reader, including, but not limited to, the following:  (1) a traditional office memo: “F.Y.I.: Need To Talk”; (2) a curse and request: “F. Y.: I Need to Talk”; (3) a curse and slur of the other: “F.Y., I(diot):  Need to Talk”; (4) a curse of other and self  (although it should be “me”) “F. Y. (&) I: Need to Talk.”  

          Syntactically the poem shifts and reshifts as the woman experiences her ambivalence—her connection to and separation from her colleague.  The white spaces mimic the undefined spaces between them.  The unmarked enjambments rush us toward the next lines, much as the woman approaching the man. As readers, we may be tempted to read in the missing punctuation, thus inviting us into a voyeuristic relationship with the characters.  Honoring Merwin’s punctuation aesthetic enriched the poem and made it more dynamic. Here is the full current draft:

F Y I  Need to Talk

Between us  the cinderblock wall
Its sweat  grit  and empty cores
You puff True Blues and Now

To smoke a frame around your door
Where I wait to ask you
Again  to open your window

You will belch the belch of one
Who has no need to state
My office  my lungs  my gut

Words to stun
My eyes will tug at your eyes
Don't gaze down the length of my hair

To my left breast
My hand a cameo at my throat
My elbow a shield

I'll say something about breathing
Tantric yoga  you'll say
Best kind of breath   I won't

Understand   You'll say
All those naked yoga positions
I'll tell you love

Is a poem   You'll say
Emily Dickinson was an S&M
Lesbian  black leather and studs

Under white piqué   I'll say
Love is an art
You'll say  Sex is a ribbed Trojan

My ears  like vacuums  will draw
Forth your words to hang
Like swollen tongues from your lips

Your sentences will build around you
Like the cathedral of excrement
One tropical caterpillar

Sculpts around itself to say
To birds  You don't want me  Please
Don't eat me I lift  now  my fist

Miss Liberty  
Rock of desire  chisel of
Despair   strike the match

Acknowledgements:

cummings, ee. “W (Viva).” Poems 1923-1954. New York: Harcourt, 1954.

Merwin, W. S. “Just This.” New Yorker. 6 June 2005.

Rich, Susanna. The Flexible Writer. 4th ed. New York: Longman/Allyn & Bacon, 2003.

---. “Slapped:with;liGhtninG: Poetry and Punctuation.”  In Mentor and Muse.
            Ed. Blas Falconer.  Carbondale: Southern Illinois UP, 2009. 





Tuesday, January 22, 2019

Index of Posts

BECAUSE I CAN TEACH
© Susanna Rich, 2020
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      George Bernard Shaw famously said, "Those who can, do; those who can't, teach."  Adam Grant's reply was, "Those who can do, can't teach." Because I Can Teach is a series of essays that celebrates teaching as an art that one must learn and develop. The posts range across a wide variety of topics such as these: writing, teaching, the teaching of writing, literacy, media, poetry, literature, rhetoric, Shakespeare, classroom etiquette.  The blog anticipates printed collections, the first of which will be entitled Words, Words Words: Literacy and Learning.  

1.     March, 2014/January 25, 2014:   Media Freeze: Disavoiding the Void

2.     February 1, 2014:   Void, Vacuum, Silence, Blank

3.     February 8, 2014:    You, I, We

4.     February 14, 2014:   Damning with Praise

5.     February 22, 2014: Landing the Helicopter

6.     March 1, 2014:  A Monarch Shmoops off Cliffs, Sending off Sparks—The Prison and Misprision of Paraphrase

7.     March 8, 2014: “Basically” Means “Generally”: How Not to Mean What You Say

8.     March 14, 2014: Teaching on the Edge of “I Don’t Know”

9.     March 24, 2014: Yes/No, So-So What, It Depends—Intellectual and Ethical
       Development

10.  March 29, 2014: The Bliss of Marking Papers

11.  April 5, 2014:  Teaching to the Test*: Duh?

12.  April 19, 2014:  Training the Elephant

13.  May 1, 2014:  Teacher on Mute

14.  May 12, 2014: Knowing By Heart

15.  January 30, 2015: Write a Poem a Day

16.  January 23, 2018: The Rude Student: Preparing the Way
17.  January 31, 2018:  Scrolling, Scrolling
18.  February 7, 2018:  Prompts, Proctors, and Pornography
19.   February 13, 2018: First Words First
20.  February 19, 2018: The Tree of Knowledge: Binary Oppositions
21.  February 25, 2018: “You’re Not Confused”
22.  March 4, 2018: Dailiness: Showing Up for Yourself
23.  March 21, 2018: Writing Reviews
24.  March 29, 2018: Teaching from the Heart: A Pyramid of Needs
25.  April 8, 2018: PagiNation: A Fable & Meditation
26.  April 16, 2018; isSlapped:with;liGhtninG: Punctuation and Meaning
27.  April 24, 2018: Punctuation-at-a-Glance
28.  May 1, 2018: Plagiarism in the Digital Age
29.  May 8, 2018: One Paper Clip: Detail, Design, Depth
30.  September 22, 2018: Journals, Diaries, and Kitty
31.  October 4, 2018: The Adventures of Journaling
32.  October 7, 2018: Rescue for “Lie” and “Lay”
33.  October 13, 2018: Attacking Literature: How We Talk
34.  October 16, 2018: “Line Endings: The Acrobats of Poetry”
35.  October 21, 2018: “Will it be on the test?: Trust and Joy in the Classroom
36.  October 23, 2018: “Playing Literature Like Music: (1) Introduction”
37.  October 30, 2018: “The Metaphysics of Testing”
38.  November 4, 2018: “Stealth, Over-Ride, Ambush, Surprise: Write Now”
39.  November 6, 2018: “’Chew upon this: Digesting Quotes”
40.  November 15, 2018: “Flintstoning: Where Does it Start?”
41.  November 25, 2018: “Spiraling In: A Moebius Model for Creativity”
42.  December 3, 2018: “Propping Up Characters: Staging in the Classroom”
43.  December 6, 2018:  “Term Papers vs. Essays: Entering the Conversation”
44.  First A.I.D. for Writers”
45.  Superstars Present: The Benefits of Term-End Performances
46.  January 22, 2019: “Index to Posts”
      47.  January 26, 2019: “Boredom and Creativity”
48.  February 3, 2019: “Intentional Fallacies: The Literary Séance”
            49. February 10, 2019: “Left Brain/Right Brain”
50.  February 17, 2019: “Reading versus Studying: A Continuum”
51.  March 3, 2019: “Martha and Mary in the Classroom: House vs. Home”

52.  March 16, 2019: “Evaluating Teachers: What’s Important”

53.  March 19, 2019: “Writers’ Wrodeo: Workshop Whoas and Wonders”

54.  March 21, 2019: “Why Write?: Knowing When and How”

55.  March 26, 2019: “Story! Not Plod: Don’t be Thorough: Be Deep!”

56.  April 3, 2019: “Can I Ask You a Question?”: Dominance in the Classroom

57.  April 9, 2019: “What the Heck Kind of Question is That?”

58.  April 16, 2019: “Grade Junkie Rehab: Benefit versus Credit.”

59.  April 23, 2019: “A New Day for Clichés”

60.  April 23, 2019: “Fishing for Knowledge”

61.  April 30, 2019: “How Many Pages Do You Want?”

62.  May 7, 2019: “’I gather Paradise’”: Experiential Learning

63.  May 14, 2019: “Classroom Seating: War Zone or Campfire?”

64.  May 23, 2019: “Why Poetry Matters to History”

65.  September 7, 2019: “Why Are You Here?”

66.  September 15, 2019: “Poetry and Popcorn: Coming Back to Our Senses”

67.  January 12, 2020: “Digital Gods: How Devices Turn Us into Robots”

68.  January 18, 2020: “Break the ‘I’m Sorry’ Habit”

69.  January 19, 2020: “Poetry by the Numbers: (1) What Numbers Can Mean”

70.  January 21, 2020: “Poetry by the Numbers: (2) Stanzas”

71.  January 26, 2020: “Poetry by the Numbers: (3) Rhythm, Culture, and Meaning”

72.  January 26, 2020: “Angels Cards: Spells and Incantations”


74.  January 31, 2020: “Journal for Authenticity: (2) How Much?”

75.  January 31, 2020: “Friends, Factions, Fights: Classroom Feng Shui

76.  February 3, 2020: “The Dunno Effect: What ‘I Don’t Know’ Means”

77.  February 6. 2020: “Ways of Learning: Information, Skills, Interpre-tation, Experimentation”

78.  February 8, 2020: “The Five-Paragraph Essay: The Fallacy of Trifurcation”

79.   February 8, 2020: “To be a great part of your title”: How to Write Them  Catchy

80.  February 11, 2020: “Who’s in Charge: Are you Proactive or Reactive?”

81.  February 15, 2020: “Titulographobia: The Fear of Writing Titles”

82.  February 16, 2020: “Journal for Authenticity: (3) Survival”

83.  February 16, 2020: “Journal for Authenticity: (4) Security”

84.  February 17, 2020: “Journal for Authenticity: (5) Power”

85.  February 20, 2020: “Journal for Authenticity: (6) Love”

86.  February 20, 2020: “Journal for Authenticity: (7) Communicate”

87.  February 24, 2020: “Journal for Authenticity: (8) The Wall”

88.  February 27, 2020: “Journal for Authenticity: (9) Create”

89.  February 29, 2020: “Journal for Authenticity: (10) Be”

90.  February 29, 2020: “Critical Approaches to Literature: Author, Text, Reader”

91.  March 2, 2020: “Boston Has Six Letters: The Use/Mention Distinction”

92.  March 3, 2020: “Characters: (1) Type Casting”

93.  March 12, 2020: “Characters: (2) ‘By Any Other Name’”

94. March 15, 2020: “Play Literature Like Music: (2) Sound Frequencies”

95. March 16, 2020: Playing Literature Like Music: (3) Dylan Thomas's "Do Not Go  Gentle..."

96. March 23, 2020: Characters: (3) “Where Lies Your Text?” Deconstruction

97. March 27, 2020: Characters: (4) Development in Shakespeare’s Comedies

98. March 28, 2020: “After Great Pains”: What’s Lost in Translation

99. March 31, 2020: “Come, here’s the map”: Charting Shakespeare’s Genres 

 100. April 2, 2020: "Come they of noble family?"  Genealogy and Shakespeare's  History Plays

101. April 9, 2020: “Bless the Moment: Poetry Here, Poetry Now”

102. April 13, 2020: “Poetry by the Numbers: (5) Shadow Fingers and Revision

103. April 15, 2020: “Poetry by the Numbers: (6) Sonnets

104. April 16, 2020: “Much To Do To Do Shakespeare: Strategies for Exploration
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