Tuesday, April 23, 2019

A New Day for Clichés

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the which, “A New Day,” is a cliché, itself. A cliché is an overused, been-there, done-that, same-old empty expression—even this sentence is filled with them—"been-there,” “done-that,” “same-old”—I could have added other clichés to my descriptors: “shopworn,” “dead metaphor,” “yawns.”  But why bother about them?  (Another cliché.)

            The word cliché is an onomatopoetic reference to the sound made by a stereotyping machine—a printing method that slides a bar back and forth over a paper laid on an inked plate.  Cliché, cliché, cliché. The word “stereotyping,” itself, is a metaphor taken from that process to refer to viewing those who are different from us as if they weren’t unique individuals—same thing, same thing, same thing.  It is a denial of the diversity and changeable nature of life. It inflates our egos at the expense of other human beings. Clichés are an invitation to stop asking questions.  Democracy, humanity, all scientific and creative activities are predicated on asking questions.  Without question, without questions civilization implodes.

            Cliché is defined as any word, phrase, idea, or habit that has lost meaning by careless overuse.  When Shakespeare first coined such phrases as wild goose chase, green-eyed monster,
seen better days, forever and a day, fair play, lie low, and good riddance—they were original and meaningful to his contemporaries.  But most of us in our twenty-first century urban lives never see a goose, even as a Thanksgiving meal, let alone know what a wild goose looks like or what it would mean to chase one.  And how many times have you wished someone to sleep tight?  That expression refers to a time when mattresses were laid atop a series of ropes that were tightened by wooden turners each night.  With our sleep number and digitally managed mattresses, sleep tight no longer makes contemporary sense.

            In stoking stereotypes, prejudices; in shutting down creative and critical thinking; clichés give us a—here comes another cliché—false sense of security—a feeling of certainty, tradition—a common language.  But clichés—like all racial, gender, national, and sexuality stereotyping—are dangerous.  Just because something is familiar and pervasive, doesn’t mean that it means anything, or anything significant.  Consider a slogan created in the 2016 United States presidential election: “Make America Great Again.”  Since it’s been coined (that’s a dead metaphor, too, “coined”—most of our current currency is either paper or digital), this slogan has been slung about to create battle lines between political parties, national regions, and diverse populations within them.  I

            But Make America Great Again, in its divisiveness, is misleading and dangerous.  First, the phrase assumes a particular definition of “great,” a very vague and overinflated (another dead word referring to balloons and tires) term.  Next, it assumes that America has been in—whatever sense you’d like to project—great!  It also assumes that if America was great that somehow it stopped being great.  All of these assumptions are just code for bashing the previous administration and inviting everyone to give into their stereotyping prejudices.

            Clichés provoke school shootings, terrorist attacks, hate crimes, and divert our attention from real issues—such as global warming. So, this business of becoming aware of clichés is not only important, but (another cliché coming) life-and-death crucial.

            I know the temptation, all too well. In my early drafts of my textbook, The Flexible Writer, I incorporated clichés.  Thankfully, my publisher sent out preliminary chapters to professors nationwide, as prospective customers.  I was mortified when they pointed out how many clichés I had used.  I realized that using them was a reflection of my insecurity about writing the book, my need to cozy up to readers, a way to say I’m one of you. Naturally, that was a victim pose, not worthy of someone who was on a mission to help others write authentic, original work.

            So, too, especially as a student writer, you might find yourself using clichés, for a variety of reasons:

(1)   You don’t realize you are
(2)   You’re padding your paper to reach a page quota
(3)   You’re insecure about your writing
(4)   You don’t have the energy to think
(5)   You are hypnotized by clichés

Languages are repositories of history.  As Ludwig Wittgenstein wrote, “to imagine a language means to imagine a form of life.”  It’s nearly impossible to write a phrase without invoking some metaphor that someone created afresh eons ago, but that is dead now.  Think of them as being on a continuum—from Almost New to Boring. 

Rule #1 for a writer, especially a student writer, is Don’t Be Boring. Consider clichés in writing to be bookmarks, placeholders, blank spaces (for a cliché is a blank when it comes to thinking) to be revisited—deleted, rethought, revised and re-envisioned. 

Here are some clichés I harvested from a recent set of student papers.  My yuckiest is in today’s society. The word society can apply to as little as keeping society with oneself, to the multi-billion inhabitants of earth.  It can apply to a group of skinheads as well as a gathering of Quakers.  The word is impossibly broad and uninformative.  My second bleh cliché is in fact. The word fact derives from the Latin facio, which means ‘to make.’ One person’s fact is another person’s question. We make them up until the next more compelling point of view emerges. To modify a claim by appending as a matter of fact shuts down thought and invites all the other dangers of clichés.

 Then there are beck and call, has feelings for, putting women down, what stood out to me, has to do with, at first glance, ranting and raving, keeps a close eye on, something to be said for, in a flash of an eye…

Consider clichés to be signals and opportunities to wake up to language. Become a cliché hunter, especially in your own writing.  Consider the expressions in the art at the top of this post.  Go to the internet, type in clichés, and be amazed. Listen to yourself and others. Name that cliché and then ask questions. 

            Name and avoid clichés. Strive for original, thoughtful, vivid language. To do so is a political and moral act of respect—for oneself and for others.  It is a route to authenticity and civility.  Becauseicanteach.blogspot.com is devoted to identifying clichés in education, specifically, and in language, in general.  Are you, as it were, in?

Looking forward to your observations on and examples of clichés.

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19 comments:

  1. Reading this post made me laugh a little bit. As I read about cliches I tried to be conscious of what cliches I may use on an everyday basis. It is so true, that I am not fully aware of. When I read your reasons why people tend to use cliches I definitely find that for myself I am not realizing I am writing cliches. Also, I agreed heavily with number 5- you are hypnotized by cliches. I believe that as a student it is extremely difficult to stray from what we have been taught growing up. It is what is comfortable to us as writers and we are not always aware of the repetitive behaviors we have.
    With that being said, I find that as you learn to write you learn about specific words such as transition words. The transition words are what we become comfortable using and rarely do we find ourselves ‘thinking outside of the box.’ With taking your class it almost terrifies me to hand in a paper, not because you are a scary person BUT simply because I am nervous of if I am being to boring, if I am using new words. The reason that is, because change is typically scary. So, as a writer we adjust to a certain style and stick to it because it is what got us that “A” I told the teacher what they wanted to hear, I used the appropriate transitions and bam I got the “credit” I needed. Between my shakespeare class and my young adult literature class they have fully challenged me this semester to be more conscious of my writing and my writing style. I can honestly say this semester alone I have researched more words than previous semester and found myself searching the ‘synonyms’ for a word to help spice up my writing.
    Kelly Fleschner

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  2. It's amazing how unaware I am of what I say at times. In awkward conversation, the cliches seem to slide out because I can't think of anything to say. When clichés pop up in my writing, I've noticed it's for the same reason. An old professor taught me that cliches are an opportunity to go deeper. So instead of saying, “She felt the weight of the world lifted off her shoulders”, I could describe what the character was doing physically that shows this. Then it becomes, “She exhaled and noticed the array of colors the sunset was creating in the sky. It was this first time she looked up in weeks.”
    When revising my work, I try to look out sentences and scenes where I simply say what the character is feeling, and try to describe it through an action instead. Whenever I tell and don’t show, there is almost always a pesky cliche roaming around. It all comes down to specificity. The tools of good writing tend to be linked; using one leads to the use of another. Avoiding cliches also gives me a chance to get to know my character better, and have a stronger understanding of what they are going through in the story. In the above example, I asked myself how would my character show her relief? What behaviors are specific to her? How would she show relief as a response to what just happened to her?


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  3. I find this blog very insightful and a pleasure to read.This semester I benefited from a few professors telling me about the use of cliches and the use of parallel structure in my writing just balancing things out.
    Therefore,I used the feedback to cultivate the habit to pay close attention to what I want to say,how I say it and when I say it.I started to see my over -worked cliches and my inability to really write out what I need to say.Cliches I believe were becoming my fillers when I fail to think logically and much deeper. Without the use of cliches I am able to analyze much more and to use the paper clip approach that was introduced to me in my Shakespeare class, thank you Dr.Rich.As I continue in my writing process the use of cliche minimized and I am emboldened to write and not worry about them.

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  4. Dr. Rich,

    I was waiting for a blog about clichés! In our Shakespeare class Spring 2018 we did a 1-2 page draft to get a feel on how to write for you class and almost everyones’ papers you put on the projector had a couple clichés! For some reason people depend on them. But ever since then I try my hardest to never write in clichés because my words are more important than using a phrase that has no relevance to my actual writing. I also told myself they are bad but I never knew they had different meanings behind them. For example, when you said sleep tight had to do with matrasses and ropes I was stunned! Therefore, thank you for the insight!
    From now on I’m going to continue to not be so boring as you say! I know sometimes I can catch myself being cliché and I want to refrain from that. Being original is better, being me is better. So many things can be considered to be clichés even saying “that’s such a cliché” is a cliché!!!
    I appreciate you sharing about your textbook The Flexible Writer because it made me feel like I’m not alone with the clichés but also that may have been tough. Sometimes we can be so insecure about our own writing and to share something like that shows how you overcame criticism. I will continue to revise and edit and always make sure my words have their own meanings. Maybe one day someone will call my words a new cliché.

    Thank you,

    Anastasia

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  5. Dr. Rich,
    I failed to realize, until you revised my last paper, how many clichés I use on a daily. Whether it be at work or with friends and family and I started to wonder why? Why do I use clichés? I think it’s because it helps get straight to the point instead of wondering in silence thinking of how to phrase something. If I talk slower and think before I speak I may be able to eliminate using clichés in my everyday language. I never bothered to pay attention to when I use them or when others use clichés.

    Going forward, I refuse to use clichés in any paper. I will also try to substitute a different wording for said cliché to avoid and eliminate saying them. It’ll not only help lessen the annoyance for others who hate hearing clichés but it can also help me put to use my vocabulary that I store and never bother to use.

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  6. Clichés are often used a lot in writing and most of the time we don't even notice how much we actually use it. I don’t realize any of it until a professor points it out for me. Especially when it comes to writing poetry I often tend to use a lot of Clichés, it is a habit that I have of doing when I write my papers and poems. It’s like I take the “easy way out” so I don't have to think too much to figure out another word that would sound better and help the poem strengthen it’s imagery and and form so it doesn't sound like its an elementary school based poem. I noticed that when I think too much about what I want to write, I tend to butcher my words and go with what comes to the top of my head first. Which most of the time it is a cliché. Something that I just say often and bring it into my writing because I feel like it sounds good enough when in reality it is just another typical cliché. The use of imagery is very important when it comes to trying to prevent yourself from using a cliché. It helps me actually think about how to make the cliché word better, something different and give it more image so it is not too broad and dull. I started to use a lot more imagery in my poetry recently and it really began to bring out a better aspect in my writing.

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  7. Wow, the usage of cliché is my absolute weakness. Cliché is define as a word/phrase that has lost its meaning by careless overuse. I use cliché in my own ALL THE TIME. To the point that they come out like word vomit and I don’t even realize they’re cliché. In all honestly, I’ve never been taught about how to switch up my word usage when it comes to my own writing and especially my poetry so this class with Professor Rich I’ve been able to try my hardest in switching up how I use my vocabulary. The five reasons that I find myself using clichés are definitely because I don’t notice that I’m even using them, and at times I don’t have the energy to think. Cliché are boring and there’s nothing worse than being a writer and having the reader consider your work as not interesting and cliché are exactly that. I didn’t realize that until I got to this class. The amount of times I used them in my writing I never realized that until I got into this class how basic they are. After a couple times meeting with Professor Rich I was able to point out my own cliché in my writing. I told her that after this class that’s going to be something I drill into my head forever, because I’m going to be able to point them out so easily that when I hear them I might just cringe.

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  8. Nicole Diefenbacher

    I honestly had never realized before just how many cliches I use on a daily basis. I was made very much aware of it, however, when I took your Writing Poetry class last fall. I never realized how many I would use in my writing. But I appreciated the feedback and I used it to improve my writing.

    I never realized how “in fact,” or “in today’s society” could be considered cliches as well. I have used those statements in my papers time and time again and I have never thought that they were considered to be cliches. But now that I think about it, I feel like I have used these in my papers to extend my word count because of word requirement.

    Though I am graduating and will no longer have to write papers, I will, in the future try to be more aware of my use of cliches in any and all poetry I will write. I also appreciate your words, Dr. Rich, on cliches and will keep them in mind in my writing.

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  9. Dr. Rich,

    After reading this post, I realized how many clichés I actually use every day, let alone in my writing. Now that I have realized how much I actually do say or use them, I can try to stop myself from saying them as often as I do right now. I am glad to have taken this class (Emily Dickinson) because your feedback on my papers, as well as your many blog posts have helped me become a better writer. Thank you for enlightening me.
    Andrea Piaggio

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  10. I'm sure somewhere in these comments I have another response from a previous semester, but I wouldn't pass up the opertunity to shy away from this blog post. this has helped me tremendously in my poetry writing. When you are younger you get taught that these clichés are "deep" and "poetic". Going forward with my writing experience, I began to look at them as placeholders. I was using these quick, witty statements BECAUSE I did not have the original words to fit the moment or the mood so I would go with a clichés I knew of that "sounded good". Now, I look at these and think of my own words to take it a step further using better vocabulary and thoughts from my own mind.

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  11. Dear Dr. Rich,

    After reading this blog post, I truly realized just how many clichés I use on a daily basis. So after reading this post, I counted how many I might use throughout my classes, homework assignments, test, quizzes and papers and found them to truly be ALOT. I realize that clichés are boring, and completely unchallenging as a writer. Furthermore when you broke down the reasons why writer use clichés in this list
    (1) You don’t realize you are
    (2) You’re padding your paper to reach a page quota
    (3) You’re insecure about your writing
    (4) You don’t have the energy to think
    (5) You are hypnotized by clichés

    It was number three that truly Dear Dr. Rich,

    After reading this blog post, I truly realized just how many clichés I use on a daily basis. So after reading this post, I counted how many I might use throughout my classes, homework assignments, test, quizzes and papers and found them to truly be ALOT. I realize that clichés are boring, and completely unchallenging as a writer. Furthermore when you broke down the reasons why writer use clichés in this list
    (1) You don’t realize you are
    (2) You’re padding your paper to reach a page quota
    (3) You’re insecure about your writing
    (4) You don’t have the energy to think
    (5) You are hypnotized by clichés

    It was number three that truly stuck a chord within me. As a English major, it is truly a shame if I have to rely on dated clichés to convey my message. I should instead find new exhilarating ways to deliver my message to my intended audience. With that being said I will truly try and go out of my way to limit my ridiculous use of clichés throughout my life.

    Thank You
    - Robin Gill

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  12. Dr. Rich,

    This post is so awakening, as in a daily does of reality - kind of awakening. Actually, scratch that. This post is when a blind man can see. This post is when it is bitter cold in June. This post is when I see blue under my feet and not above my head. This post is when the eraser point of the pencil is sharp and the point is flaccid.

    None of those descriptions are cliche's, I hope - because they are original. They are mine! I do value honesty more than anything -so if they are please let me know. Or at least I am trying to value honesty more than anything because what the world boils down to is honesty and money. Everything goes back to money, is that not true? Can something be true and cruel at the same time? Yes, this exact post and response also. The world is also cruel and true at times. Other times, it is wonderfully, simply, complicated. When will we move on with our lives and stop living in this cliche's? We need to become smarter, wiser, and more honest human beings - like we used to be.

    Human beings as a community - as a population - need to reinvent themselves. Some people are fast paced, some people go with the flow, and some people stay between paces. If we stay in our current mental, physical, and emotional state (despite our political circling of the drain) we will never move on. We are all lost souls circling the drain called, "Life". Yet - life goes on - and we need to reciprocate that. Just like productive jellyfish!

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  13. Before this semester, I have probably used multiple cliches in my writing without realizing it. Even now, when I write, I find myself looking back and wondering if I used any cliches - there’s usually at least one there. There are some cliches that I don’t even recognize as a cliche. For example, happily ever after is in my eyes, a well known cliche. So I aim to steer away from the obvious ones. My trouble is using phrases that I don’t recognize as a cliche. In your blog post you mention “Make America Great Again” as a cliche and I completely see how it would be but only because someone pointed it out to me. I used to think using cliches in my writing made me sound intelligent but looking at some of my prior work and reading the blog, I see how I appear boring. Boring is not a word I want to ever describe myself or my writing. I will make it a point (cliche?) to not only review my work for the use of cliches but attempt to avoid using them altogether. I need to be more conscious of my verbiage, especially if I want to call myself a writer.

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  15. When writing a first draft I love cliches. They do make great placeholders. I like to write everything out first and then step back to see where my writing went. I tried avoiding cliches as I thought them in my writing, but it was too early for me to know what I wanted to say. When I go back I think, “How will I make it unique? How do I put myself into my work?” Trying to make my work mine is my favorite part of the writing process. Perhaps, I should try to stop myself from speaking cliches in my everyday conversations and familiarize myself with more cliches to avoid. I caught a few cliches like “understand the world around me” in this post, but I quickly deleted them. I have a lot of work to do.

    Wilneris

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  16. Before reading this blog post, I wasn’t too familiar with the definition of a cliché nor did I know I used them on a daily basis. After your post, I still had a little trouble understanding, but after reading through a few of the comments I connected and identified with them more. Looking back at it now, they were definitely a ‘place holder’ whenever I would write any type of assignment that was a given a page requirement.

    Going forward, I will take the time to develop more unique words that will better help my assignment and cut the crap and eliminate the clichés from future assignments.

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  17. OMG! I believe this is a mini cliche too. After reading this, I researched cliches in google images and found there are more than I realized. Most of the cliches I've found were surprisingly popular within writing papers (English classes). Even when we write our resume, cliches are added to boost our chances of being noticed. Cliches lie waiting behind every corner. There are cliches of multiple genres (areas) such as travel, song, sports, science, etc.

    Looking for cliches within my writing should be an interesting task now. I would like to think as "a society" we can be original thinkers, but the truth is quite the opposite. People, including myself need to learn how to be original and the process of being or becoming original in thought or words can be daunting.

    Therefore, wanting to leave on a lighter note of positivity, I'll say "I think I can."

    Meagan AWP 5000

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  18. After reading your blog .. (a clichés in the making of what is happening) .. I realised how society (clichés) as a whole is built up of clichés. Referring back to Megan’s post: “ Even when we write our resume, cliches are added to boost our chances of being noticed.” Instead of being human, we want to use these boosters to be the same as what humanity (society) wants us to be. At this point, is clichés embedded into our society? Is clichés what starts the awkward questions of: “How are yah?” or “Top of the day?”. I understand those are the typical and formal ways of greeting another person, but can we come try something new? But then again… who am I to judge what makes something clichés or not? Is this response in itself clichés? Is simply using the word clichés?

    Patricia D. AWP 5000

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  19. Early in our AWP course, to be complete, I found it to be SLIGHTLY annoying when you pointed out the cliches I wrote in my poems. But I quickly realized, it's because YOU want US to be as original as possible. Quickly, the annoyance turned relife. Mainly because I myself didn’t even know I was writing cliques. As a whole,society strives for originality but is surrounded by cliche in a number of different mediums, like pop culture, and even the books we read. Having a professor that points out our cliches in order to come up with something original that still holds the same, if not more, meaning was an extraordinary experience.

    Christian Paiz
    AWP Spring 2020

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